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Overall, the story was well written, and i certainly could not find any obvious mistakes, but you could have elaborated a bit more about the background of the characters, for example, you could have found more about Dumbledores family, his relationship with Gellert how he molded and used Tom for his own ends, how he failed, and how finally he used Harry.
And so on.
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