A.N. Hijaz

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Good Plot

The plot was good and the author put in a lot of work developing in-depth characters. My only criticism is the story was plagued with filler words and there is a large info dump at the very beginning that might be able to be doled out through the first few chapters.

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First Two Chapters

There were a lot of long paragraphs that could be shorter. At the very beginning of chapter one, there was a significant info dump that could have been dispursed through the first chapter and there was a bit of unnecessary information that didn't add to the character or the story.

The plot is creative and I found it interesting. I can't wait to read more of the story as it comes out.

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An Easy Read

The plot was easy to follow and there is solid character development throughout the story. I was a little confused about where the characters were in the beginning, there needs to be more detail regarding the landscape/surroundings. Otherwise, it had a good amount of detail and I enjoyed reading this book.

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