
Gallandro7
4 months ago
St. Elsewhere was a hospital drama in the 1980s. It goes on for a couple years then ends. The finale explains that the entire hospital was inside a snow globe owned by the autistic son of the lead doctor.
As I explained in my review, the first 9 chapters were excellent, but then it ends and the reader gets no conclusion. Per your comment on my review, if you go that route? I think you need to have all 3 books written and released at the same time, otherwise you run the risk of readers being disappointed with the ending of book 1, as I was, and not reading further. IMO.
Gallandro7
4 months ago
Greetings, I just finished your book, The Lycan King's anonymous mate. The title makes sense now, which is more than I can say for the first 9 chapters. I originally though you put the wrong summary on the book, but later learned you didn't. The first 9 chapters were decent, although rushed. The last 13 chapters were unnecessary, ridiculous, and completely misguided. It felt like you tried to mash 4 books into one and didn't give any of them the right amount of time and effort to bring out the story. I felt cheated that Aria and Caspian's story didn't end, they were the best part. I'll review it in a couple days. my title review will be....If we shadows have offended, pray to this and all is mended, that you but slumbered here, whilst these visions doth appear.
Tobias_K
7 months ago
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ALSage
a year ago
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