Alexa Ailine

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Pleasantly fulfilled

The plot has a specific target group, but everyone should give a chance to the passionate writing style. You fall for the main characters to the point you start thinking you know them in real life. They are flawed. Real. Tangible! The way you describe the details, surroundings, emotions, expressions are to be applauded. You are on a wonderful path.
P.S - I love the image choice for the cove. If I may advise, change the time font and make it bigger.

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Lovely surprise.

This is the first time reading a horror story because I get scared easily. But I indeed enjoyed this book! The writing style is impeccable, and the author knows how to maintain the reader’s interest. The reading was an exception I made, but I am happy I did so. I love how it made my heart race. How it made me feel connected to the characters, to the emotions. I almost cried once. It has grammar and punctuation errors, but its easily overlooked.

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Surprised.

I really like this book. The way you take your time creating each character, giving them uniqueness; The way you create the world around them. It’s unique and beautiful.
It took me some time to familiarise with your writing style, but that’s on me, I'm not used to it. ahah
I found some basic mistakes, nothing that a review wouldn't fix.
All the reviews are well deserved.
Congratulations, sweetie.

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More

The plot is good, just like the flow of it. I'm in love with the characters and can't wait for an update. I hope you finish it because this is a diamond in the making. The only downside of the book is the grammar and punctuation. There's a lot of mistakes that take the focus out of the story. For example, the "I" you write as "i". The book needs a review focused on grammar and punctuation.

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Disturbing

This was the first book advertised to me, so I started reading it first. I went in with an enormous amount of expectations due to the hundreds of good reviews, but the writer shows a disturbing view of people. She justifies rape in a way so as to be accepted by the readers. She’s quite a writer don’t get me wrong, that’s why your brain starts to accept Stoic’s actions has understandable and forgivable. But do not mistake it for it, because it’s all DISTURBING. Stoic's character had so much potential and power, but he has reduced to something small and naive, which doesn’t make sense. He was a war hero, he killed dozens and knock on Death's door... Almost got raped by a girl due to alcohol! And still, you want me to believe he doesn’t know how to discern what rape is? Furthermore, Emmerson is the most self-absorbing person ever. She doesn’t grasp the world around her. She doesn’t show concern with others. She didn’t see her brother for years, and when he comes back she doesn’t even give him a glimpse. The only good thing about her is her self-esteem. Only that.
I pray to God the writer doesn’t know want rape is, because believe me, you never make fun of it, take it lightly, forget, or forgive!! After going through something like that, your mind and body need time and space to heal. You can't stand people touch you in any way. I really didn’t want to mean or aggressive. If so, forgive me. Again, the characters had so much potential.

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