Alexia Whitelock

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Autumn Frost

This is amazing!

From the first chapter I read, I knew Autumn - at least, I felt like I did! Your development is swift and perfect, and the reader really gets a sense of your characters.

Your voice is strong, and the text is clear. I can't wait to see where this goes!!

-Alexia Whitelock

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The Flames That Binds Us

From my first look at the cover, I was entranced by this story.
The plot of this story so far is beautiful. It's intricately woven, building an intense world from the first chapter. Also, the character Lucius is very well thought out. He shows the reader his personality from the very beginning.
All in all, fantastical job!!
-Alexia Whitelock

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A Fury of Wolves

The historical information of this story, especially its first chapter, is very strong and well-put. Your sentence structure is clear and concise, and all your paragraphs have a main idea. So, your grammar / mechanics are very good.
However, you should be sure to only advertise this as a historical work (I'm not sure if you do otherwise, just a pointer!).
Besides that, I love it! Great job!
-Alexia Whitelock

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Wow!!

I have to say, this is one of the best books I've read on Inkitt.
Your writing style is exceptional. The voice of the narrator cuts straight to your bones and chills you - great job! Also, the premise is very unique and creative. The satirical comments add humor to the novel.
All in all, fantastic job!
-Alexia Whitelock

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Demons, Mercenaries, etc.

Love this story so far!
Your writing style is unique (if a bit hard to read at times, but that's okay) and fun to read. I love hearing about the main character's escapades through this world you're building.
Can improve on grammar - check up on how to punctuate dialogue.
The plot deserves its five stars. It's unique and interesting. Can't wait for more!
-Alexia Whitelock

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Fantastical start!

Your story, as I know from reading the first chapter, has so much potential. If I ever get time in my life, I will be thrilled to read the rest of it. From the first paragraphs in the story, you introduce a main character, her family, her cat, and her dilemma. That's really impressive, so good job.
Also, the cover is beautiful. Spot on.
Lastly, your book has all the elements to build a huge, intricate world full of faeries, vampires, and the like. Capitalize on that. Take advantage of the specialness of the world-building trait of your story.
Good luck ahead,
Alexia Whitelock

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Quality Poetry

Great poetry!!
I didn't have a lot of time on my hands, so I decided to read the first chapter of a few books at random. Yours was the first I chose, and I'm happy that it was! Your writing style is really strong within your words, and there were little to no punctuation errors in the text.
Fantastic job!
-Alexia Whitelock

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Inescapable

This book is fairly good.
First of all, the cover could use some work. I cannot read - or even distinguish - the text from the mosaicked background. I use Canva for my covers; it works very well. If you need any help making a cover just tell me, and I'd be happy to help.
Second - this story has a lot of potential if you play your cards right. The book starts pretty slowly - I only read two chapters, and neither of them really compelled me to read more - but the idea of Thinkers and Feelers is intriguing.
Third - your text could use a lot more adjectives and adverbs. I don't feel very invested in this story or that the world is very well-developed so far. Again, maybe that changes in later chapters.
Good luck in your writing, and keep up the good work!
-Alexia Whitelock

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The Capricorn House

I've been reading and writing reviews on this site for a while now, but never have I stopped to actually read more than two chapters.

So when I ended up finishing this story, reading almost fanatically, I have to say I was surprised.

The Capricorn House is original, incredibly written, and purely amazing. In this book, you feature a very unique and stellar cast of developed characters. The reasoning behind everything that happens blows me to the stars, because I know that I could NEVER think of something this good!

Please keep writing! I'd LOVE a sequel to this!!

Oh, and also, I have a pointer: Advertise this book more. It deserves waaaaay more votes and reviews that it has currently. Post weekly on the Review Me club or another like it (that's what I do, it works for me)

Thanks for this literary gold,
Alexia Whitelock

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Bad Liars

First of all, I like the cover. It's very aesthetically pleasing to me. :D

Second - I love the plot of your story! The summary intrigued me into reading more than I usually do of these books! Your chapters are short, sweet, and to the point. Also, your characters are very well-thought-out and developed. I can't wait for more!

-Alexia Whitelock

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It Might Be You

So far, a great read!

To be honest, I love the plot of this book. Your characters are witty - especially Chloe, I love her! - and dramatic, which adds a needed interest to the story. I'm excited to see where you take this, and even more excited to finish the chapters that have already been begun!

There are a lot of grammatical errors, so I'd recommend getting a beta-reader or a program such as Grammarly.

All in all, good job!

-Alexia Whitelock

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Heart of Time

Wow. Just wow.
I just finished the prologue, which was touching and scary at the same time. Your writing style is so clear. I absorbed every part of the written text.
The plot, so far, is stellar. The 'wife's' metamorphosis in the prologue was incredible, because in so few words I was introduced to and attached to a character.
Great story! Would definitely recommend!
-Alexia Whitelock

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Great Job

This is a story that absorbed me right away, with an intriguing, well-developed plot. The author's voice was evident and strong throughout all seven chapters. So many twists made the story not only interesting but captivating. A must read!

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City of a Thousand Races

From my first look at this text, I liked it. Your characters (Magnus and Naomi) came to life on the page (screen?) with good development and dialogue that really speaks to the characters' personalities.
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Your story has a lot of typos. I'd recommend either getting a beta-reader or proofreading before you publish. Also, refresh on the rules of formatting dialogue.
Besides that, though, great story!
-Alexia Whitelock

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