Alexis Dredd Zarcal

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Two Sides, One Sequence.

Overall, it's a rather thrilling piece, merging superstition, psychology, slice of life, and the usual Japanese risque fare. All the elements have rhyme and reason in being placed together.
The respective background stories of the characters involved so far also give a sense of flair and thrill.
I'd like to give due commendation to the fact that there's an A-side and a B-side to the same sequence of events by telling the story through the perspectives of the two protagonists. Hardly does one commit to that level of depth in a similar storytelling fashion.
Although the story had to be cut short in mid-confrontation, it also works that way as it prepares the reader for what's to come next.

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