Alice Gichuru

Nairobi, Kenya

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Goose bumps

I have always enjoyed paranormal stories because I believe there is a world out there that we don't know a lot about. The story is well developed and it flows. However I wish it would dwell more on what the narrator felt and reacted to the events that were happening. The story also has a few grammatical flaws which I think the writer should have easily corrected if she had read and re-read the story. All in all I enjoyed reading the story. It was an easy read and has inspired me to try and write a paranormal story one of these days.

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