Alicia Cameron

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Plot twists

Wow, this story had me hooked from the beginning. There were so many plot twists, just when J.T. thought he'd won, something else happened. You're a very creative writer, and I don't know if this was your first story but it's well done.

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Ghouls, Ghosts, Haunted Houses

I don't normally read horror, but I found this story and it sucked me in. I wanted to know who lived and who died, how they died, if they were ever going to get out of the house. It definitely had me on the edge of my seat. I couldn't stop reading. Although you can't really get attached to any of the characters, because you never know who is going to end up a victim next. Nobody is really safe. Usually there are a couple of characters who have "main character status" and that you can predict they are the ones who aren't going to die. But in this story, even though Victoria is the main voice, she could easily be the next victim.

The suspense is great. So great that I wanted to read as fast as possible to find out what happened. And then...the ending. It was a little disappointing. I was a bit confused, though, and there's still some things left unanswered. I hope to read book two at some point to bring some conclusion to everything. Also, there were points when the point of view randomly skipped between characters, which could get a little confusing, but even so it was pretty easy to figure out who was speaking. I do kind of wish that they had spent more time trying to figure out how to get out of there and break the hold that the spirit had on them (is there a spell? a chant? maybe do an exorcism? a sacrifice?) rather than just sort of accepting their fate.

All in all, great job. You took a plot that has been done (teenagers spend the night in a haunted house) and still made it suspenseful. I enjoyed reading this story and look forward to book 2.

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Great love story

Some stuff was a little repetitive, and again, predictable. But I still wanted to keep reading until the end, and I am hoping that there is a 3rd book. If this book gets published, I will buy it. I love Sydney and Conrad's relationship. It's a refreshing example of a good, healthy relationship that girls and women should look up to, instead of the thinly veiled abusive relationships starring in novels these days which gain popularity and fame quicker than writing about a normal relationship that goes through some struggles. Of course, Sydney and Conrad's relationship is anything but normal. But hopefully now they can start their life together.

Also, I will be a little disappointed if, in the next book, Sydney and Conrad have kids very shortly after getting married. Or Sydney reveals that she's pregnant. In my opinion, they should have more time together to enjoy each other and travel (since they have the money to) before having the responsibilities of children. Besides, what if Conrad's hand gets better, and he decides that he wants to do one more tour before getting into having a family? And Sydney still wants to pursue her career at some point. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Hopefully the next book will be released on here soon.

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Addicting

The story definitely kept me reading, but some of the plot was a little predictable. Even still, the ending was sad and I didn't want Conrad and Sydney to break up. I was also 18 in my senior year so it's not unheard of. I prefer to read novels of older/college-aged adults anyway. Great story, looking forward to reading the next part. I hope this one gets published.

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Great story

Great story, for once I enjoyed reading about characters around my age (28) rather than the typical 15 - 17 year olds that are in most YA romance, though I don't think this was meant to be a YA romance. I also considered being an archaeologist because I love history and digging up stuff, also metal detecting, but there's no way I can move around so much, and I would kind of prefer to stick around my province lol. I also liked that it focused more on the character building than the romance itself. I'm not sure I approve of getting married young, I am old and just got engaged after being with my fiance for two years. But in that time before I met him, I got to be in other relationships which some I didn't really enjoy, lol, and I got to experience life before a serious commitment. However, my parents got married at 24 and are still together after I think 32 years and still never fight,, so that's something. Anyways,, good story, and I read it all in a day. Each chapter ending made me want to keep reading right away.

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Creepy

So creepy and once again an ending with a twist that I wasn't expecting. Great job at keeping me entertained.

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