Alicia Cameron

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Great story

Great story, for once I enjoyed reading about characters around my age (28) rather than the typical 15 - 17 year olds that are in most YA romance, though I don't think this was meant to be a YA romance. I also considered being an archaeologist because I love history and digging up stuff, also metal detecting, but there's no way I can move around so much, and I would kind of prefer to stick around my province lol. I also liked that it focused more on the character building than the romance itself. I'm not sure I approve of getting married young, I am old and just got engaged after being with my fiance for two years. But in that time before I met him, I got to be in other relationships which some I didn't really enjoy, lol, and I got to experience life before a serious commitment. However, my parents got married at 24 and are still together after I think 32 years and still never fight,, so that's something. Anyways,, good story, and I read it all in a day. Each chapter ending made me want to keep reading right away.

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Creepy

So creepy and once again an ending with a twist that I wasn't expecting. Great job at keeping me entertained.

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Plot twists

Wow, this story had me hooked from the beginning. There were so many plot twists, just when J.T. thought he'd won, something else happened. You're a very creative writer, and I don't know if this was your first story but it's well done.

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