Alize Zaide

Elipses

Hi! I want to point out that ellipses are generally used to indicate an intentional omission. I'm having trouble getting through the first few chapters because of the grammatical issues. I wish there was an NA (not applicable) option, because I don't want to rate your story overall and plot yet (which is why I gave it an average 3 stars). I wouldn't say your writing style is particularly bad, but the grammar disrupts the flow of words. I hope this helps. :)