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Really good but...

I love the book, the plot is amazing and different. The world building is excellent, it’s easy to get immersed into it. The biggest flaw I see is the dialogue. The tenses are often wrong or out of order, but that can be changed by little editing. Try to remember how you would say it. I think you have great potential.

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Interesting read

Definitely different a change to the normal romance story. The writing gives the emotion from the character so beautifully, you can’t help but continue it. Definitely a must read.

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