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Hood Life and Romance

The grammatical errors are way to much, along with the sentence structure. This story had the potential to be a page turner. I feel the author lost enthusiasm midway. It helps to proof your own work or have someone you trust proof for you before releasing to the public.

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Unexpected

It was a great story. It was intense early and started to slow down as if the writer lost enthusiasm for the story.

The grammatical errors were too much. An author should have a proof reader or proof their own work.

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My dominant boss

The grammatical errors in this story as you know are unacceptable. This is a story so similar to a book I read a few years ago by a different author. I’m an avid reader so thanks for the effort. In the end it was a decent read.

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Coffee Cream

There were a few grammatical errors. There weren’t enough to detour my reading. It was a good read. I plan to seek other works from this author if there are any.

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I won’t call you Daddy

Grammatical errors are present. I’m able to figure out what word was meant to be written. The story is a good one.

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First thing I love the story line. The grammatical errors are too much to overlook. Proof reader is definitely a must!

Too many grammatical errors.

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First of all how does a virgin know to perform such acts or act act in such a promiscuous manner? Too much too soon!

I said all I care to at this time.

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Chiara D/D of New York book #3

Great [email protected] I think I may have learned a few tricks.

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Book#1

I am drawn into this book more than I thought I would be.

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The Huntsman

I enjoyed the book. The author could have given us a better ending.

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Destroying The CEO

This is an enjoyable read. Lots of grammatical errors for m, but I managed to figure out what was being said.

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I married the ceo

I just did

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