Alyshia Wheeler

I love reading romance, erotica, werewolves, really heart felt love Currently writing a book. “A Queen will Rise “

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Wow

This story from beginning to end has you on your toes. When the characters cried you cried when they laughed you laughed there is so much emotion in this story it is insane. I do have to say author you are a talented writer.

Though the story is amazing it was rather repetitive in style. Main character finally has something good then it turns bad gets better repeat. (Trying not to give away details).

Epilogues- it would have been nice to see there life end in a happy ending such as S, J, T, B in heaven giving a final goodbye to characters taken too soon

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Interesting

I never read a book quite like this. I think anyone likes romance would love this book

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Loved it

I loved this story. I hope there will be a sequel especially due to so much left up in the air like you know who in the hospital and the deep connection finally made known to the main characters.

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Very good book

There were quite a few grammar and plot errors I tried to comment on them when I saw them but I’m pretty sure I missed some.

The story is very good and of course everyone loves a happily ever after. Kinda wish we would have seen more of their life together afterwards maybe book 2. Overall great work

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Really enjoyed this story

There were a couple of grammar mistakes but they go unnoticed when you’re reading such an intense story. This is a great book I recommend many people to read it

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Point blank this story needs work. Great plot great story line of events. However very clumsily written typos, missing words, weak character development, confusing events. I would suggest you sit down and seriously edit this story if you fix your mistakes and makes the characters grow more together. Than you have a solid foundation for a great story. Who knows maybe even one people will have to pay to read.

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Very good book

A few grammar errors throughout the story but nothing to serious. Your story is definitely an interesting one. Your personal quotes and such is good but it would be better if you either put all of your words either at the beginning or the end of the chapters. Other than that this story is very good

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Great story little rushed

After reading your book I really enjoyed it. I feel like you could of really expanded on this love story and even gone into the lives of the children watching them grow up. I feel like the ending was extremely rushed from candy’s quick wedding to the main characters shotgun wedding. I do believe you could of spent more time actually developing your story instead of rushing it. Good luck on your future writings

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I’m literally crying

I love this story so much tho I do wish that she wouldn’t have been so stubborn and then there would have been more of the love, family and all the good stuff. You are a fantastic writer

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Good story

Grammar needs some attention but that’s about it. Very good story I hate that it ends before they confront their father or find out what their mother called about. I really enjoyed this story

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I loved this book

Grammar lacked in some areas but all in all a very good love story. I enjoyed reading this book

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I like the story

I really enjoyed this story I am excited to see if there is a sequel

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LOVED IT !!!!!!

I loved this story it really hits you in the feels and that is what a good book is supposed to do

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Cute story

Very cute story I loved it. Could of used some of the good stuff 🌶🌶🌶 but al in all very good story.

Work on your grammar and twenty is not two 0 twelve is not one two

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I love it!!!

Spell check would do you some favors.

I absolutely love this story I felt all the feels from crying to happy to plain ole pissed off. This is what a book is supposed to do. I love it!!!

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This is the best story ever

One thing I did notice was every time you went to say physically you said psychically but all in all this is a perfect love story and I am excited to see what is in store for our favorite couple!!!

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This is horrible

Revise your work before posting it. The second sex scene between Damon and Claire wasn’t even Damon it was Nathan and honestly the whole plot of this story is lost and well dumb. Rewrite and actually take the time to fix your mistakes and let someone else revise your work before posting it as well

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Wtf

Dear author,
First off the grammar in the book needs serious work. I would advise writing your story in a google doc or Microsoft word and use spell check I promise it’s going to be your best friend. Second the story didn’t flow very well

The plot is good but the different scenes you were trying to create didn’t flow with the story line and it really didn’t help that there was no transitioning into the different scenes and it really hurt your creativity. Plus you could of described your scenes better and actually create the imagery in the readers mind.

- reader

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I CRIED!!!!!

I LOVED THIS STORY FROM BEGINNIGN TO END. I cried I laughed I loved I binge read the whole thing in about 5 hours 😂 it is currently 7:02 am and I just finished the whole thing!! I wish there was more to come

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I love it!!!!

This is an amazing story and I really do hope Isabella and Roman get back together.... it’s so sad to see them apart

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Steamy and I love it

I love this story so far. It is definitely hot how she literally has twins ready to fuck her in a heartbeat. The possibility that she could be mated to both seems a bit obscure because every wolf/Lucan/person only has 1 mate so I think she will have to choose one or the other. As far as scenes go definitely need more detail of surroundings and where the characters are located.. and I think a steamy shower scene with the twins and Naomi would be perfect

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