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LOVED this book! Thank you for the great read. Writing was well done, a few spelling or grammar mistakes, but overall great! ❤️❤️❤️

Interesting story

This story is interesting, but very hard to read. It is full of grammar mistakes, and needs a lot of editing. Sometimes the story doesn't make sense, and you spend more time trying to figure stuff out, then actually enjoying the reading. The base of the story is good, but it needs a lot of editing.

Nice short story

This was a nice short story. However, using this as a rough draft, with some editing and adding on could be an amazing story. It has so much potential. As is, its a little to quick to have great detail allowing you to get to know and like the characters. Can be confusing at times with lack of detail. But if you added to it, it could be amazing!

INCOMPLETE BOOK! Says complete, but it leaves off in the middle of a sentence 🤷‍♀️

This book has so much potential, and with some editing could be a good book. The writing style wasn't very good, and it left off in the middle of a sentence. Plus the story is definitely not complete even if there is a sequal.

Interesting read

The story was good until the end... what a terrible cliffhanger! Im really hoping there's a sequal since this one ended so abruptly.

I very much enjoyed this book!

This book was heartbreaking, heart-rending, and heartwarming all in one. A great book that keeps you engaged the whole time. I had so many things to do today, but couldn't put it down. Well written. GREAT Job!!!!! ❤👏

Good storyline

Great storyline. With editing, this story can be a great story! Sometimes the book is confusing because it seems like there are missing pieces, or the story skips around. I get the overall story of it, but there could have been a lot more detail so it didn't feel so much like it skips things. Grammar and spelling needs to be edited, as well as sometimes the wrong name was inserted in some places.

Interesting Book

Definitely different book. Story is interesting, but sometimes hard to follow. Cal's POV is strange, and hard to read. But overall the book was good.

Enjoyable to read

Very enjoyable to read. Not really into the whole daddy thing, but it wasn't enough to ruin the book for me. I thought the writing was great, the character and their development was great. Great overall story. There were a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but not a ton. Thanks for the great read!

Great Read !

This was a great story! I enjoyed reading it very much! Engaging, and kept you interested. The characters were fun and well developed. Thanks for the great read! 💜