Amanda S

As for a Croatian girl it's challenging to write an English story. Hope you can help me grow more my writing style. Thank you for stopping by and your feedback is truly appreciated ❤

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Thumbs up!! Loved it!

Chapters have few grammatical errors but nothing major, but the story as plot and all is just amazing and intriguing, makes you just want to find out what is going to happen next, definitely keep up wonderful work and updating as now I need to see more ❤

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Intriguing and somthing new!

Truly intriguing and to me something new and I loved it. I wish there were more chapters as I wana know what is more to happen. Update soon and great work ❤

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Loved it!!

You captured my interest since the beginning and the whole time the way you write is truly beautiful. All I can say is I cannot wait to read more.
Big hugs and keep it up ❤

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Interesting story, good read!

The story still needs little work on especially on grammar area. The outline looks good, and has a possiblity to grew into a really good story. Only be careful of the grammar, but loved it.
Big hugs ❤

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Interasting!

Interesting book overall with interesting features. Interasting read!

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I truly enjoyed the story as it is truly intriguing and keeps you eager to find out more. The characters POVS are greatly written as the writer gives through the story little hints and keeps the reader's mind occupied as the mystery follows. Definitely a book worth of time and read!!

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