Amanda M.

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Extremely Good plot!

Okay I’m glad i read Your book
I only read The First chapter but i Can already tell that it’s amazing.
I mean Like THE PLOT
Your writing style is very Good and very describtive. It gives a lot of details that makes The story come to life.
Your characters has a Good depth and is interesting to follow. The only thing i could be a little confused about is The identity of The main caracter. Like man Or woman. But at The same time it’s Nice with a little mystic.

You have a great story and plot, Your writing is perfect,

Your only flow in my eyes is that i belive that You Can make Your caracters more mystic and beliveable. For example The Beauteful blonde lady at The start. I know she was suposed to be a hysterical lady but Your choice of words made her Sound a little too cliche. Dont misunderstand Me, she gets just The right depth later on but The First impression is very strong and doesnt match her fighting skills.
I hope it makes sense, Sorry I’m not that Good at explaining.
But
I really Like it! Please keep on🙏❤️

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Lots of love

Ooooh
I cant Wait to to next chapter!❤️😍
And omg baileyyyyy. I love him! I hole there comes lots of drama with him and her getting togheter hehe.

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