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The book was so positively thrilling, it was an unforgettable read- i just could not put my phone down. I would love to own this as a hardcopy someday. The dark theme did throw me off- but it added to characterisation in the story, and developed the plot greatly. You have an admirable writing style that is beautifully consistent and i never felt the need to grammatically correct the piece, as i do with quite a few literary works.
The plot, in my opinion, is unique and well thought out, with few or no potholes, and its an easy read. Perhaps it is a bit long, so the piece would be ideally for a reader willing to read a larger book, but the introduction of consistent problems keeps the storyline interesting and mysterious,so its not really an issue.
I wish you the best of luck for the future! Happy writing!
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