Ambrie Mina

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The alphas son

Great story! You did great with leading up to that “the jerk from the city” is... you know who. I mentioned it in the first chapter but be careful of too much exposition. I really only saw it in the first and then the other chapters were better. Keep up the good work!

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The artist and the biker

I really like this story and where it is going. I can’t wait for more chapters! Some things I thought were a little strange were the realism of the story. I’m a college student and actually happen to go to a pretty small school so I know how it is. The description of the school seems a little stuck in high school. Idk if thats how you wanted it to be but college is definitely not the same. No one really knows if anyone is new and honestly doesn’t care haha. There’s too many people even in a smaller school. Just try to do a little more research on the difference between college and high school life. Other then that great story so far!

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SINISTER

I’m not the greatest fan of incest In stories, but I’ve ill say that it has a good storyline and a good amount of mystery. There were some times where I thought the story was moving way too fast and I wanted more details. Make sure you don’t miss the little details too; the ones behind the big picture. Other than those things, good job! You have a very nice writing style.

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Letters to Xavier

I love this book and the different way it is written! I give it a big thumbs up and can’t wait to look and see what else this author has to offer. The only thing wrong was that there were some slight grammatical errors or words stuck together. Other then that, it’s a great read!

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