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what i most loved about your story was that i could sense the interaction between the characters and i could feel myself as if i was sitting between them and watching them speak and argue. this is quite an asset in your writing. keep up the good work.

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I loved how strong you made Kagome. in all the other stories i read, almost all of them, kagome is a weak whiny baby who only cries and gets in trouble. i love that kagome in your story doesn't give in to all of inuyasha's antiques, and i can feel the strong quality she had. good job and keep on writing.

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i liked everything in your story. starting from the powerful cover image, to the attractive title, to the head on summary and the strong plot and story telling. i loved the genre and i think you gave the characters their due. good job and keep on writing.

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I loved your story. quite a poetic summary you have going on over there. I loved the plot, the character interactions and everything else. good work and keep on writing. best of luck and i'll keep reading your stories.

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I loved your story because it is quite unique and original. it is the first time i read something similar and i found it to be quite good. nice work, organized and well done. keep on writing and congrats for this story.

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It is a nice story but it was difficult for me to understand because i am used to reading and writing male dominant stories. however, if i open my mind towards new horizons, i have to confess that your story has a quite original take on the conflict between kagome and inuyasha, and it is a good reading.

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OMG all the time i was reading i was thinking to myself, nothing makes sense! at one point i started laughing. it seemed that we were in a mirror world where things that would never ever happen were happening one after the other! when all the girls lined in for him to unhook their bras i was laughing so hard. i mean it is any man's dream i guess but it goes against every logical and moral thing. the end had me laughing very hard, and suddenly everything made sense again. good story.

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Well, it's a sexy story bordering on erotica (I have read stronger things) and i think it is nice to read the romance before having a sex scene. i don't like stories where the two main characters have a random fight and make it an excuse to suddenly have hot hard sex. it is ridiculous. that's why i liked how you progressed before reaching that phase. good work. i loved it.

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This chapter is too cute and is really well written. i loved the plot, the progression of the events, and i loved when she kept on asking him questions till he lost his temper. hahahah it was funny to imagine the situation. nice story, keep on writing and i will keep on reviewing.

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I liked this, a lot actually. first of all the summary is captivating. second of all, the first scene pulls you in right away. i loved the confrontation between hojo and Kagome. although it has a dramatic context (Hojo cheating on Kagome), it still has a kind of humor in it which pushes you to smile while reading the remaining of the chapter. god work, one of my favorites so far.

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I always love to read a good story with a good plot and attractive pairing of characters. i think that your story has these components and i really enjoyed reading through it. keep on the good work and always keep on writing.

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well, i liked the plot of your story. it is quite new and not intensively used and chewed on like some other stories out there. i liked the interaction between the characters and i liked the speed of the events: not too slow but not too fast so we wouldn't understand what's going on. keep on the good work.

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Hey, so normally i don't read sesh/kagome pairings but i said to myself that i should read and find out how this pairing would go. i immediately loved it. i liked the way that you kept Sesh in character without making him fall immediately in love with kagome and leave behind everything he believes in. i loved the fact that his emotions were not so apparent and that in his thinking he was still the same we knew in the anime. makes sense? i hope it does. thank you keep up the good work.

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i loved the way your writing went. it was easy to read, well done. i always find it hard to read stories when the writing is poor. it is obviously not the case. i liked the uniqueness and the originality of the story and i would encourage you to keep on writing since you have it in you. i hope that my review is helpful to you and keep on the good work.

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I really loved it. it was quite a touching chapter and it felt so real. i really and genuinely enjoyed reading it and i think it is rich and has a definitely interesting plot. good job and keep up the good work.

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So, i have started reading your story. i guess that the main character belongs to you. i liked the first chapter so far. i think that is neatly written and provides a good introduction for the story. keep up the good work.

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what i love in your story is that it leaves us wanting for more every time the chapter ends. this is a strong quality that not all of the stories have so good work and i strongly encourage you to keep on writing.

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If you knew me, you would understand how much i love a kagome/inuyasha centered story. and i have a feeling from this chapter that your story would meet my expectations. nice writing and good plot. keep on the god work.

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Envyyyyyyy. let me start by saying that when i see a story with such a title, i am immediately hooked and i have great expectations because....i simply love one worded titles. and let me say that you did not disappoint my expectations. good job and keep on writing.

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I really loved it and i was not expecting it to be sesshumaru. truly, he was like the last guy i would expect. really throws back in time to my best friend's bachelorette. we had a little bit too much fun. anyway, back to the story, i loved it. good story line and nice writing. keep on the good work..

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I loved the way you tackled the matter of Rin coming of age. i really liked the things she did, made me laugh really hard, and i could just imagine myself being a haughty lord having to deal with a young adolescent female. hey, you can keep on writing more about this. i loved it. good job.

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I liked the way you stepped up and took control of the ending as you saw it fit. i also like how the lyrics merge with the storytelling in a very harmonious way. good job, i loved it and i would encourage you to write more.

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This is an emotionally deep story. i love these kinds of writings where you feel something towards the characters. in my opinion, it doesn't matter if these feelings are positive or negative. the important thing is to be part of it. i loved it.

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I felt like i was watching one of those ID channel episodes on maniac killers and these kind of people. it is a powerful story because it reflects the dangers we may encounter without knowing it in our life. sadly, it is sometimes the case and your story sheds light on this dark side when a man loses his humanity. Not my kind of story, but i read it to give it its due. good work.

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I like stories that have original plots, not ones that are used again and again until we tire of them. i believe that your story is one of those that are quite original and deserve to be read. i liked it. keep on the good work.

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You have done it again. i love the way you tackled every single aspect of sesshumaru and rin's relationship. you have a way of writing which makes the story even more interesting and leaves us wanting for more. great job.

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I loved this one shot as well. it is light and fun to read. I love it when it is short but straight to the point. the romanticism was not over the top, especially since it is Sesshumaru we're dealing with here. Great reading.

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That was a cute short one shot story. i love these kind of writings because they make you express the sentiment that compelled you to write them without having to go through a whole story. it is like a captured fragment of your imagination. i loved your writing and i loved the way the two characters interacted together. keep on the good work.

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Hey there, i have started reading your story and i pretty much was hooked. what I liked the most was the progression of it, meaning that when the main character expresses feelings of rejection of pity and when you feel that he is not content but the need of work overwhelming his other sentiments, well i found that i could relate to this. overall, good chapter. i would have liked for the plot to be faster but i can understand the need to establish your character's personalities and project them from your mind onto the typing. Keep up the good work.

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