MortalLearner

Melbourne, AU

A multifaceted person who loves reading, writing and teaching.

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Operation Graveyard's Review

The party at the beginning of the story reminded me of one of the shark movies. Then it turned out to be a horror with a lot of comedy in between. The author has certainly known how to grip the readers into his story. I hope the story would continue, thou. I highly recommend Operation Graveyard to everyone who fancies horror.

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Amazing Thing!

So gripping and fascinating! This book will blow anyone’s mind. It’s highly recommended for weekend reading collection! Well done!

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Good Novel

Haunted Chapel really gripped you from the very beginning. The plot is twisted and full of riddles which got reader to get curious about what was really happening. This book would be absolutely a good novel for readers to read everyday! I highly recommend this book to everyone. You'd love it.

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An Incredible Story

Dark Shadows is a unique and intriguing story that would keep you engaged with the whole journey of each and every character of the story. The plot is developed quite well and flowing. I can't wait to see the rest of Blair's adventure. I believe this story would catch interest a lot of YA readers who love paranormal stories. Highly recommend it!.

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A Masterpiece

This fantasy story is an absolute masterpiece. The plot is well written, intriguing and full of surprised. Tales of the Known World by Frost would take you to another world while you read it. I highly recommend this book to those who love fantasy story and to add it into their collection. As for those who has not liked fantasy story, this book is worth reading!

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Intriguing Storyline

The Author has been able to keep the readers glued to the story, turning one page after another to satisfy their curiosity. The plot of this story is absolutely interesting. Not to mention how the characters were well-developed. This book is definitely highly recommended to young adult readers.
I have been personally entertained by reading the first twenty chapters of this book and I can tell that this book is worth reading for. At first, I felt like I was reading a play script rather than a novel for its lack of details of the scenes in a narrative paragraphs. Instead, I could sort of understand and imagine everything through the characters' dialogues, which was still enjoyable. However, the author has been gradually adding more details, more narration in the later chapters which gave more insight into the story for the readers. I personally find the author's skill in writing, plotting out the story that involves loveable characters in this book, is magnificent. I wish you a good luck for your writing career.

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A Lot Can Happen

Two chapters of the story that I have read made me want to read it some more. Author has been successful to keep the reader intrigued. I am pleased to recommend this book to YA readers. There were a few technical issues like punctuation, for instance. If you could look over through it, that'd be great. Well done!

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Good Story

First of all, the cover of this book is absolutely mouthwatering. Second of all, I enjoy reading the first chapter of this book and I look forward to reading the second one and more. So far, I have seen how the story is well maintained and plotted out. I can see that it will be able to grip readers. However, the 'Lol' in the dialogues between the characters a little bit disturbing to me personally. I think it could have been narrated as 'she laughed out loud' and then followed by the dialogue. Just a suggestion, thou.
Overall, I highly recommend this book! Well done, Author.

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Magical

If you like fantasy story, this book is definitely recommended to you because you'll be hooked! The author described the fantasy world, which involves God and Goddess very well. It's a great book. I love it!

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Interesting Story Line

Dark Rose's has a very interesting story line. I'm not sure if the book is to be continued, thou, after the third chapter. However it grips the reader easily. The characters were developed properly and the plot is amazing. Yet, it needs editing, especially with the punctuation and paragraphs. You did good job overall!

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Worth Read

The Chamber of Sins would introduce reader to the other side of the world: heaven, hell and their angels. The plot is well written and flowing. Anyone would enjoy reading the adventure of a ghost, a half-angel and a demon. I totally recommend this book to any reader who loves supernatural world.

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Funny, Spooky and Interesting Story

This story is one of a kind that will keep your interest on edge, from its twisted plot to its funny characters. The story is well written and developed with minor mistakes. I believe the Author has sufficient knowledge in relation to all the terms presented in the story, which made the story line to be easy to read and understood by the readers as they were all defined properly.
Although the book appears to be spooky, it turns out to be hilarious. I believe you would enjoy this story. I highly recommend Creature Seers to YA readers.

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A Different Kind of Cool Werewolves' Story

As one of the werwolves' story fans, this book has given me a new event of werewolves' world. The plot is intriguing. Although the characters of the story, especially the lead female character, could have been developed better, they are still loveable. I highly recommend Wolvensoul to those who loves werewolves, especially the young adult readers.

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Interesting Story

"Ray of Sunshine" is an interesting story with an intriguing plot. A sweet relationship between Dark and Ray would keep the reader entertained. Despite the fact that there were a few errors in author's technical writing skills. the story itself is very enjoyable.

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Interesting Story

The story is simply well written. I like the beginning of it and the way the characters were introduced. I’d love to read more to see what the actual story is about. Nevertheless, I would recommend this book to all of the young readers out there as this story is enjoyable to read.

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