Andy Mohring

Greetings. I am looking for readers who are looking for books to read. I have a few different to choose from but my books are mainly fantasy/urban fantasy/magic.

Hello. If you are interested in fantasy/ romance/ magic books, please read my book “The Blood Medallions. And if you like it feel free to leave a review or a comment. It would be much appreciated😊https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/1112631.

Cover for meaty suits looks like good omens

Chapter 7 is now available. Have fun reading.

Thanks for reading and leaving an honest comment on my book . I appreciated it only I'm a beginner and the book wasn't for you. You seem more like an action book reader. The book has a bit of action but not so much its quite sentimental but thank you for reading my book. I hope i can improve my writing and become better.

Hi, Hanifa this side, I am an Inkitt Affiliated Thriller Author. I am currently publishing- 𝗪𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗜𝗳 𝗛𝗲 𝗗𝗶𝗱𝗻'𝘁 𝗗𝗶𝗲? my high-school murder mystery. It is about a girl who starts receiving voice messages from her dead boyfriend.

I'd love to read your reviews on the same!

Dropping the link below: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/855476?utm_source=shared_ios

Thank you for adding AFTERMATH to your reading list! You're in for quite an adventure.



If you enjoy the story, please consider leaving feedback along the way or a review at the end. And if you happen to fall in love with the story and want more, please consider recommending to a friend so they can fall in love with it too and wait in eager anticipation with you for the next installment. :) Happy reading!

Hello @andy256.
After You graciously offered to give me feedback on the start of a book that I am writing, you proceeded to belittle me in the feedback based on things that I wrote in my bio. About me. (I noted that you deleted your comments). Rightfully so. That said:
~I do appreciate feedback that is constructive, as it pertains to the content of the book.
~I appreciate when typos are pointed out, in the context of the book.
~I appreciate sage advice on how to better draw in a reader audience.
~My style is not to give up everything in chapter one.
I probably would have followed any bit of your advice, until you referenced things in my personal life that you know nothing about.
1. My life is not hectic. It is full.
2. I transitioned from working 70-80hours a week to be "Mom" and "Wifey." That is my full time job: Chef, Cook, and Bottle washer; and I couldn't be more happy.
3. I decided to further my education, because why not do something I love? Thrilled to be back in school.
4. I write when I can write. I am not paid to produce.
5. I shared information about my life so that readers understand that my full time job is Mom/Wife. Not yet an author.
Try not to be so biased and prejudiced based on what people share in their profiles.  
Happy Reading! ~Cave Marie

Hey,
I have seen you giving some honest reviews to the books of other authors.
I would like you to read my books (at least 5 chapters each, or if it excites you... Read further)
The books are: THAT ONE RIDE (complete), NEVER KISS YOUR BEST FRIEND (ongoing)

I would appreciate that.
Thank you,
Ta_bloomfield (Tanya)

First can you tell me what exactly was wrong in my story? I mean where did you think i was worse. I know I'm no way good but I'll try to improve in those areas.Secondly how much did you read, i myself don't like my opening. If you read chapter 2 it is much better. Have you read them?I'm commenting as I can't reply on the original place fr some reason. Sorry if its bothersomeI'll need an in depth review if you can, ill appreciate any thoughts you have