Omar Villal

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Interesting Dialogue

This is a very quick read, and while some things can be improved upon, like punctuation and redundancy at the start of the first chapter, I believe the final two were very interesting and were great in delivering a compelling message on war and the sacrifices soldiers make. Keep up the great work! :)

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