Angela Hernandez

Atlanta, Ga.

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Questing: A Failed Tale

I think you have a good beginning to a story and I look forward to seeing where you go with it. There seems to be quite a bit of mystery in Cara's backstory and it will be interesting to see how that comes to light as your plot plays out.

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Rule of One

You have a really good start to this story and I'm very interested to see where you go with it. The only reason I didn't give you 5 stars on rating the story overall is because its only three chapters so far. Keep writing!

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