Angel Norvell

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Catchy

I do love this story thus far. It is certainly catchy and makes you want to keep reading. Good job at ending things on cliffhangers to make the reader want to read on. The only thing I will say is Caspian is an unknown character , I don't know much about the person that he is. I got evil at first the worried. He seems to be a mystery. I am not sure is that is what you were going for or not. I do like this story and I will keep reading for sure.

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Good!

This is an interesting plot I must say. It has potential to be a really good story. I do like the different charters voice. I got a bit confused because they all were in first person. It just made a few lines in the story a bit confusing. I would say write it in 3rd person. I would also say just a tad bit more description. Over all it is a catchy story and i would keep reading!

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Memories

This story being personal to you makes it so much better. This reminds me of the group of friends I had in high school. I was always lay of the group lol. I think this is a really good story thus far and I would be interested in reading on. Each person's role in the story is clear and that is great! great job!

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