Angela Rose

Brisbane

Student ParamedIc and Fantasy/YA Writer on the sIde. ❤️

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Emotional, loved it.

I really managed to connect with your characters in the 6 chapters that were written. I'm left now wanting more so I hope there's to be an update soon! Most of the time I had no idea what was about to happen and I love that in a book. The suspense and wondering makes a story so much better, there were a few characters that need more in depth explaining but I'm sure that will come with more chapters of the book. I really enjoyed it otherwise!

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