Emmalyne Errickson

Attica, New York

Loves writing stories, mostly mystery or romance and supernatural. Trying out new things. Only 17 years old, loves reading lots of books, mostly horror. Loves to do photography and such.

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All in all it is so good right now. But just look over your grammer in the first chapter and third one. You forgot to add a period in the third one and in the first one you wrote drug instead of dragged. But this is very interesting. I'll read more and let you know. Keep up the good work my friend!

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