Amazing story! Update soon?
I love the way you show the relationship between James, Theo and Harry but would love to see characters apart from the main ones, characters such as Remus and Sirius and such and see their interactions with our favourite dimension traveler. Overall, a delightful read.
Haven't read much of the story yet but what little I have read, seems interesting. Some parts do seem predictable and cliche and there are a few typing errors. I would suggest you read the chapters once more, these small errors can be annoying at times. But the story is fascinating at some points and I can't wait to read more. Try bringing in your own style and twists and I love the atmosphere you create in the story. It's just right. Looking forward to reading more!Read the story now
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