Anna

Lyall's story

You did really well, and I'm glad you didn't drag it out. The potion scene was a little vague, and I'd say a little more back story intro for the pack, and for Lucy's family, could have been incorporated. I do look forward to reading more of your work!

A wolf in dragons

I love the storyline and a few of the cliffhangers the author leaves us with! Keep up the great work and although there were a few grammar issues I give you five because I know you'll come back and do edits!