~babysunshine~

What is there to say, im a teenage weirdo who enjoys writing stories and decided to share them with others

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Overall very good... a few notes:

This plot is definitely one that keeps you hooked and I can't wait for the next chapters. That being said I do feel like maybe the grammar and punctuation could use a little touch-up. The story is great overall but I feel like grammatical errors can sort of take away from the reading experience and make certain things difficult to understand. Definitely a very interesting and well-thought-out plot though, and I can't wait to keep reading. Keep up the good work!

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Definitely Worth Reading

This was really fun to read! A little difficult/confusing at some points due to some grammatical errors but overall very enjoyable with a very interesting/fun plot! The characters are very well described and all the events of the book flowed very well. The only suggestion I have is to maybe fix some of those errors (punctuation, run-ons, indentation, etc) but otherwise very very good. Keep it up love!
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wow...

Truly a masterpiece. really well-written and intriguing, I didn't want to stop reading it and I cannot wait for the rest of it to come out!! <3

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