~babysunshine~

Overall very good... a few notes:

This plot is definitely one that keeps you hooked and I can't wait for the next chapters. That being said I do feel like maybe the grammar and punctuation could use a little touch-up. The story is great overall but I feel like grammatical errors can sort of take away from the reading experience and make certain things difficult to understand. Definitely a very interesting and well-thought-out plot though, and I can't wait to keep reading. Keep up the good work!

Absolutely Gripping Read

This was definitely an attention hogging, mind twisting story that had me hooked until the end. The plot was very well thought-out and quite riveting, and the character development was magnificent. The only complaint I had was that it was mildly wordy at certain points, but it never lost my focus and was still very interesting to unfold. (Honestly for some reason it kind of made me think of a modern, twisted version of Beauty and the Beast. Not exactly sure why though). Definitely would recommend to others.

Definitely Worth Reading

This was really fun to read! A little difficult/confusing at some points due to some grammatical errors but overall very enjoyable with a very interesting/fun plot! The characters are very well described and all the events of the book flowed very well. The only suggestion I have is to maybe fix some of those errors (punctuation, run-ons, indentation, etc) but otherwise very very good. Keep it up love!
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wow...

Truly a masterpiece. really well-written and intriguing, I didn't want to stop reading it and I cannot wait for the rest of it to come out!! <3