annequinox

"We live and breathe words." — Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Prince

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This story is my mistress

You know, I usually don't read zombie stories. But this was an exception. It's so good! Somehow I'm sad that it's only five chapters long, although I checked your FFN account and saw that it was longer there, so I guess you just put chapters together until they made five.

I really like the way you write, since it's in present tense. Somehow I'm always on the lookout for writers who use present tense rather than past, because I want to see how they manipulate the story. You're one of the good ones. With the plot, I have no problem around. It's such a sad thing that Harvey died though, and Sid, oh my, it broke my heart. I really do love Soul though. I always do.

Thank you so much for writing this story. I can't wait to read more of your works :)

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Thank you Prose!

I adored this. Truth be told, this is the first story I've ever read on Inkitt, because I'm new here. I decided to look for some stories, hoping to find some inspiration and motivation, when I stumbled across this. It's good. I don't know about other readers/writers, but I like this kind of writing. Sometimes, I do not mind the lack of dialogue, or the long paragraphs and such.

I liked the way you described the characters and I liked them myself. I, myself, am a rebel. Not a really bad one though, it's just that I like to push things when I want them to happen. I don't care whether or not people think it's good or bad. And Prose is like that. I like that she's a rebel because without rebellion, we'd all be robots just following the system and letting them put us down. Plus rejection is such a silly thing, isn't it? Sometimes, you don't even deserve it.

So I applaud you for writing this! It's such a good read and I might even read it a second time when I feel like I need a little push to write some more. Thank you for writing such a lovely story.

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