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Annette
A perfect start!
I loved the way this story started. The characters are built interestingly and your writing makes the reader instantly connect to the protagonist.
Her character is strongly built and the chapter really piques the interest of the reader. I personally am very excited to know what happens with the protagonist and her pack further!
As world building goes in fantasy novels, you've done a great job! It doesn't feel like an information dump at all which should be the goal of every author. You slowly reveal the ways of the werewolf world in an intriguing way.
The intricate details with which you describe things gives an excellent sense of the story.
Using a bit more refined writing style would make this a perfect first chapter!
I'll definitely recommend all the werewolf lovers out there to read this!
