Annie E

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Great Story

I love the plot of this story! The interactions between were and witches make sense to me and the characters feel like people, which is a challenge of mine to do so I'm quite jealous. I can't wait to read more when you post!

There are a couple of grammar and spelling errors, but nothing major.

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Great Story, Just Needs Editing

I really love your plot and it is a really creative concept! However, there are various spelling/ grammatical errors that could be fixed by reading over it with a red pen. Though your formatting and style are a personal choice, so this may just be me, the frequent switching of point of view gets a bit confusing, particularly in the first several chapters. I am not against switching point of views or even going to as many as you did, however, having just a couple paragraphs in one POV before going to another and then another within one chapter threw me off, but it may just be me. Also, you might want to make POV Change Headers and "Time Passing" headers in a different font, bold, or with some other marker to make it stand out. Great Job!

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AMAZING

I'm pretty sure that I read everything you posted in about 15 minutes. I've been hooked since chapter 2 and can't wait to read more! Great job!

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