Ann Shannon

The man who wasn't there

You are reigniting my interest in poetry. I love the style of this poem, the repetition which might be bulky and overbearing instead draws the reader in to look for a deeper meaning. Even though the poem has a sad effect overall...look not for me...the imagery is positive and uplifting in a way and doesn't leave me sad. Another great one!
Ann

Daddy the Strong

I loved this little one-shot. I also have a soft spot for daddy-Sasuke, well, Sasuke in general but daddy-Sasuke is so darn sweet.

I did notice a few word errors, you might want to reread it for them, but otherwise I thought it was well written, it told me enough without going overboard and overwhelming me. Keep writing! You have talent.

Ann (AKA Lady)

Ode to the Dung Beetle

This is such a cute little poem. It draws you in and paints a picture in your mind making it come alive for you. I especially like the twist in the last line that tells you what she is talking about. But to be honest if she hadn't told me to look for it I might not have, guess I need to look deeper sometimes. LOL

Great Job! I look forward to more.

Ann