The man who wasn't there
You are reigniting my interest in poetry. I love the style of this poem, the repetition which might be bulky and overbearing instead draws the reader in to look for a deeper meaning. Even though the poem has a sad effect overall...look not for me...the imagery is positive and uplifting in a way and doesn't leave me sad. Another great one!
Ode to the Dung Beetle
This is such a cute little poem. It draws you in and paints a picture in your mind making it come alive for you. I especially like the twist in the last line that tells you what she is talking about. But to be honest if she hadn't told me to look for it I might not have, guess I need to look deeper sometimes. LOL
Great Job! I look forward to more.
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