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Enjoying the political intrigue

So far, the first few chapters are interesting! I'm enjoying the political intrigue, and I'm curious about what will happen next. Many errors with grammar and punctuation, and there are some tense issues as well, but overall, I can understand what the author is trying to get across. I also found labelling the dialogue with the speakers' names distracting, but it seems like the author is trying something new, and I applaud that!

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Makes me want to keep reading.

I've read the first five chapters, and I'm hooked! I'm interested in what Eve actually is. Overall good grammar and punctuation. The chapters at times seem a little disconnected (sometimes there seem to be details missing from the end of one to the start of another), but I can still keep track of what's going on. Good work!

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