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The best!

The story as it really should have been.

Although I admit to being curious as to what happened to the other characters? And it's such a pity Luna never made an appearance anywhere.

Fantastic!!!

This is hands down the finest story I've discovered in HP fanfic collection...

I can't count the number of times I've laughed, cried, gone all pensive and then lost myself to wonder of being humane, the magic of love, hope, valour and honour ...

What an incredible gift you have, writer!!! What a marvelous tale you've spun here....

I pray you never stop writing, never stop being inspired, never stop HP fanfiction most of all ...

Er...

So much disoriented rambling that seems to lead nowhere? It's a bit of a confusing read for a truly fascinating idea and plotline. Well written enough that I reached the last word of the last page.

Fantastic!

This is gr8! I can't wait to read part two and the whole 7 years of fun!

Loved the work

It's a very interesting concept. Meeting in dreams.. feeling it linger in the waking hours. Lovely.

Apart from a few grammar and punctuation errors, negligible, really, it was very smooth and well written, and flowed off the pages.

Very well done.

Good fun

A fantastic plot, a great idea and a very satisfying flow.

The author could do well to add a bit more flavour and emotions into things, make it all a little less 2D but I truly enjoyed reading this and look forward to the next part.

Very well done

Great story. Intriguing plot. It could do with a bit more fleshing out, but dialogues and scene description and flow of plot lines are really well done .. enjoyed it immensely

Idea is good

Needs work on proofreading and some chapters drag on, but find yourself a decent beta to help iron out the finishing work and u do have a very interesting work here..