Asher-OG version is great
I really like it. The writing style, the progression and the plot twist. I loved everything except the leading character Asher. I want to like him. I really do but aside from having good sexual chemistry with Layla, nothing about him stands out. Nothing about him seems like a redeemable person who fucked up and apologized. He has never shown a trait that is necessary to make someone forgive him. He keeps fucking up and sweeping it under the rug. Maybe I should blame their age (17 to 24) but his character just frustrates me a little. I may not be getting it. Perhaps, that was the point. They both feel like incomplete characters because they are? Layla seems sweet and keeps putting Asher on a pedestal while he seemed (for the most part) happy-go-lucky and reckless. I'm happy for the ending though.
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