Something Twisted, Something New
The story surely capture my attention back there. finally! I had finished it. I just wanted to say... the story is not what it seams. it may sounded like a time travel troupe we might already encounter. But it is nothing like that. her desire to save her son, that even death, she still wanted to do it. The story is not about how she conquered the Silicon Valley, the world already knows it. Her story talks about how she deals with her grief. Anyway, Kudos on to your writing. This should be noticed by readers out there. it's intriguing.
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