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Winter

Great story although it is very short. This story could be made into an hour tv movie.

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The Fallen - Malachi

Fantastic story... I love it from the very first chapter. Two thumbs up to the author.

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Curse of the Mummy

A very good story... exciting... fast-paced... and I did not found a boring page or chapter. Good work for the author.

My other comments: (1) Please check the meaning of lightening. Lightning should be used. (2) Some sentences are long without using a comma. (3) The meaning of some sentences are clearly conveyed in a wrong sentence construction. (4) Samantha said she switched the real ankh the night before the opening. How does Catherine get the glow on the ankh and received the vision if what she has is the fake ankh. This is a bit confusing to me.

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The Script Stone

Very informative story. It is more of an information sharing than an adventure story... but I like it a lot though.

There are many theories here that I have read in other books or stories. But there are other theories that I read for the first time.

Thumbs up for the author!

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Echo's From The Pyramid

Exciting story though it is very very short. The author could have made it a very good adventure story with lots of action and mystery.

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The Terror From Beyond

What a nice story... exciting and thrilling... but definitely not finished. I wish to see and read the next book soon.

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Psychic

Great story... very exciting, thrilling, and suspenseful that it will put you to the edge of your seat while reading. Hoping for next part of the story or another great story from the author.

Two thumbs up!

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Orenda

Two thumbs ups!

A very exciting story with some historical background and a very unique plot.

Wish to read other works of the author in the future.

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B.R.A.I.N.

A very interesting story indeed, with lots of morals to learn. I just hope we don't reach that stage of human destruction. We still have time to save our beautiful planet.

Two thumbs up for the author.

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Wrath "Rise of the Fallen"

Thumbs Up! Definitely worth waiting for the next book... better still, if this would be a trilogy!

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Found

Definitely one of the best i have read. And it has lots of morals that can be picked up along the way. Oh, how I wish there would be suceeding book which I believe the aurhor will never find hard to do. Thanks and good luck!

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Lost

The book is good and very exciting to read. Though, there are some gramatical error... or maybe it's a typo error. Anyways, I am excited for the next book which I am sure there would be. Great job for the author.

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The Longboats

A great adventure story with lots of action. Though, there are so many questions that comes to mind while reading . . . like how did it happened in the end that they were back to the present time. And the control knows them and even welcomes them back. That gets me so confused.

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Second Coming

This is what we need now... this is what our world needs now. This scenario is very possible in the future. Do we need to wait for these wars to happen before we wake up? This story is worth sharing to all people of the world.

PS: I noticed many times the misuse of words set and sit.

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The Origin of F.O.R.C.E.

Fast-paced action, new-idea and original characters, a story with a different and unique plot, and the good thing is - it has a second book.

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The Lost Prophet

Given more suspenseful actions for Vince and April, this story is worth making into a movie. I enjoyed reading and wishing there will be more sequel.

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Odin's Wish

The story is amazing! I would love to read this again and again!

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The Cave

Great story and love reading it from the first chapter.

I just read a story about a week ago which describes Jack the Ripper as a vampire. What a nice story concept!

Two thumbs up to the author.

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The Unnamed

I have read many stories here in Inkitt, and I put this story in my Top 3 list. Two thumbs up to the author!

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The Cannibals

Very exciting and very good story. I love it from the start %even the story is quite short.

The only thing is; it is sometimes confusing while reading because of the constant shifting of the story teller or the narrator: sometimes it is Joyce, sometimes it is Nathan.

It is best if it has been in the point of just one person.

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The Sixth Seal

I love this story so much... very thrilling, lots of suspense and action. Two thumbs up to the author.

The only thing that made me think is where do the book came from? Who made the book? Aliens? Or Gods? Well, I think that leaves the reader to make.his own conclusion. Frederick and Ana is already in another planet, another dimension, or another universe at the end of the story.

What happened to the Horsemen? Will they still come after the book? Is there a sequence to this story? I hope so!

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The Chamber of Magdul

Great story with very unique concept and plot. Thumbs up to the author.

I noticed that many paragraphs are written in almost one sentence without even commas at all. Some paragraphs are written with just commas instead of period. There are also many wrong choice of words, misspelled words, and many grammatical errors.

But over-all, I still really love the story.

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The Truth in the Triangle

I like how the story goes... thrilling, exciting, and fast-paced, though I expect a better ending. Still I give the author a thumbs up for the story plot.

My other comments:
* Then is often misused with the word than, starred for the word stare, they for the word their.
* There are so many grammatical errors, wrong sentence constructions, and wrong choice of words which make the sentence hard to understand
* There are several word Richard in the wrong place
* Dick met Dolores in 1935 but they were married in 1934, must be a typo error.

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Jesus vs The Antichrist

Two thumbs up for the author. It is really a good story and I enjoyed reading it. I just don't know what will be the reactions of old and devout religious people. 🙂🙂🙂

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Mark Wild's Apocalypse Trilogy

Good stories to read.

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Tomb of Hannu

What a great story. I love every page and chapter. The story is unique and presents a story twist you would not expect until it was revealed while you are reading. Two thumbs up for the writer.

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Lost at Sea

What a great story... a good story about love, patience, hope, and faith. True love really knows no boundaries... no limits.

This story is highly recommended to all who love adventures and romance.

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First Born Son

The plot of the story is good... with a different twist. I like the story as it is an original concept and idea. But there are so many grammatical errors like the use of will and well, to and too, except and accept and many others.

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Maenad

A good and interesting story to read with a unique plot.

Thumbs up to the author.

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Dinopocalypse

What??? That's it??? Just when I started enjoying the story, and it is finished. I wish there is a second part to the story or maybe more sequence.

I like the story... words are simple... easy to read... spellings are correct and gramatically correct.

Thumbs up to the author!!!

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Black Pearl

Good adventure and fantasy story with a different and unique twist. Thumbs up!

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Heart of The Sea

What a great story... I love it a lot. But, I was waiting for her to control the water! That would be more exciting! 🙂🙂🙂

Two thumbs up for the author.

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Message From The Ark

The story gets more exciting as I continue reading. Thumbs up to the author. But in the end, it does not clearly explain if he really found the ark. He only explained what man has become and what the earth would be in the near future.

For me the ending would have been great if used in a different story plot.

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The Pearl of Avalon

Two thumbs up! A good adventure story.

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ARACHNOEXTINCTION

I love this story... very scary... bone chilling... hair raising. Although there are so many misspelled words and grammatical errors, I still give the author a thumb up for giving me excitement while reading!

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The Shapeshifter Stone

Exciting book to read!

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Indiana Jones and the Temple of the Phoenix

Not as exciting and thrilling as the first book. But, it is not boring to read though.

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Chasing Orion

Just like in cinema world, there are movies that after you watched it, you don't want to watch it again even after many years. But, there are movies in which you are hooked to watch again and again.

The same with this book. Even before I finished reading, I have already decided to read it again after few days. The story is so exciting and full of action. And, I do not believe that it will end there. A very good story like this is definitely not ending that way. I'll be waiting for the next part of the story. And I do believe that many are also waiting for it.

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Tomb Raider: Ghosts

Love it! I am an avid fan of adventure movies and stories and I definitiely enjoyed reading this.

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Terror On The Colorado

Undoubtedly a very exciting story - full of action. I love reading it from start till end. I wish to see and read other works of the author in the future.

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Gods, Monsters, and Jeff Downey

A good story with lots of action and suspense.

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Red Storm

A good one with lots of action, though a bit short. Will we get another... rather, more action from Blake in the future?

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Lost Angel of Par Amor - The Tree of Knowledge

It's a very interesting and heart warming story though I feel it is not finished yet. I am expecting a second book in the near future.

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Armitage

The writer surely has a very wild imagination... giving Jack the Ripper a new personna. Great job! Only, I feel the story is too short. It could have been more exciting and thrilling if it was longer.

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The Maltese Incident

The story hooked me to continue reading until I finished the whole story. For me this is a very exciting story. Two thumbs up to the author.

The only thing that caught my attention is how the story ends. It seems the end has been rushed. I am expecting some more description on what happened to the main leads or cast after the incidents. What happened to the Destroyer that went inside the Sacred Portal? What happened to the device that cause the wormhole?

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The Medusa File

Huuuuuh! The story is very good but I got confused in the end. Yamaguchi doesn't know or have ever met Mr. Clive. So definitely, he is not the man with Malak in the boat. It only goes down to the father of Harvey. And even if the father of Harvey found something about the Medusa group, why is it that Sato is the one who killed Harvey's parents. Wouldn't it be the job of 'The Cleaner' and not Sato? And it is not clear what is the connection of Mr. Atkins. Why was his name on the list that Harvey found?

Unless... there is a deeper mystery that Harvey's father is part of the group and he is going to expose the group. That is is why he was eliminated.

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Serpent's Heart

Very exciting story with lots of suspense and action.... but very short for me. Just when I am getting more excited reading, the story is already ending.

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Legend of the Blood Lands

Nice story. It's very thrilling. But, one thing that got me really confused is how Dunstan was able to survive the raging floodwater. One minute he is in the water and unconscious; and the next minute he is back in the desert with his bother Alec. How did it happen?

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The Eye of the Lion

I enjoyed reading from chapter 1. But, I don't get the end of the story. It really confused me a lot. What happened to the baby? What was Mark really up to? I don't get his real motives and intentions? What was the role of Mark in the story?

Will there be a second part for this book?

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Annala: Memoirs of A Mermaid

This is not just the memoirs of a mermaid. This is a study in geography and history. This story is very informative and entertaining at the same time.

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The Last Artican

A good one but a bit short for me. I am expecting more adventures and more actions from our heroine.

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Monstrous Denial

I love this book a lot - lots of thrill and adventure. This book also depicts religion, faith, trust, sacrifice, and conspiracies. I wish there is another book.

Two thumbs up for the author!

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The Fire That Froze

A good story with very deep plot. It will take deep thinking to understand the story.

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The Secret of the Lost Island

Fascinating and a very good adventure story. Two thumbs up for the author. This story is movie worth... and I would surely watch it.

I like Danica and Hayden. They are always fighting and arguing about almost everything but in a very funny way. They make me laugh all the time while reading. And since they are both adventurous, I wish there is a sequel to this book.

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AEGIS Wars

A totally complete story: lots af action wih some adventures, a touch of mysticsm and occult, some comedy and fun, faith, trust, hope, and most of all, uncontidional LOVE!

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Legend of the Lost

Great story. This story tells about angels, magic, dragons, fairies and others. Also, it depicts about courage, determination, faith, trust, sacrifice, and most of all - love!

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Resurrecting the Snake King

The story is very good! The author surely has a very wide and wild imagination!

There are many parts in the story that I have read somewhere before that tells the story of how we humans came to be.

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A Dangerous Discovery

The story is really good! It leaves me hanging at the edge while reading! Zeke is really good and wise!

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Conquistador

I love this story... great adventure and action story. Two thumbs up to the author.

There are very minimal error in grammar and spelling. I would love to see a continuation of this story.

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Tomb Raider: Lilith's Scepter

Indeed, a very exciting and thrilling story, No doubt one of the best I've read. But, i would have strongly preferred if it is not Lara Croft that you used. She's always crying and shedding tears, and always beaten up from almost in the beginning. If she's been another name and character, it would have been more beautiful.

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