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They say the ocean is a reflection of the sky... but in my eyes, it is only a reflection of a home I can no longer reach"I am a flicker of white in a world carved from obsidian. Surrounded by seven shadows, seven sins, seven kings of a kingdom built on silenceThey don't want my light. They want to see how long it takes for the dark to swallow it whole. Their breath smells of smoke and cold iron... their hearts are hollowed out by the weight of their own crowns."They clipped my wings to keep me in their cage. But they forgot... even a fallen angel still remembers how to bleed gold. And in this darkness, my tears are the only stars left."
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