Artisticanthology

Good so far

I like the plot and the idea. The way you started it had me confused and intrigued at the same time but i think that’s what you we’re going for . So it’s actually really good and i love how you’re very descriptive in your writing, it really creates a picture and mood for the story and scene. You have few grammatical errors which can always be fixed but overall i really liked this book. You’re doing good !