Assaph Mehr

Sydney, Australia

#Author of Murder in-absentia, a #Fantasy #Murder #Mystery in a quasi-Roman Ancient World (https://t.co/QaE5UUDzDn); Mad genius behind https://t.co/N5PxoxU2Ds

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Emotional thriller

The trouble with Romance authors, is that they are so darn good at writing - and eliciting - emotions. So when my favourite short romance writer turned to writing a horror / thriller, I knew I'm in for a ride.

Nor was I disappointed. Without giving away any spoilers, the story is told from the perspective of a woman going through a special day in her life. We are given just enough details, more leaking in slowly as the story progress, to be able to imagine the events.

And here-in is the strength of Maria Nestorides' writing. Causing the reader to imagine the full world of the story, and by this cause him to feel those events, makes for a gripping read.

A highly recommended short story, from an author to watch.

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Incredibly emotional

Very interesting to read, it did an awesome job of raising emotional response. A very well executed flash fiction.
It was also especially interesting to read as someone who's sympathetic to the other (Josh's) perspective. Double emotional whammy.
A very good work from a very promising author.

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