Athem

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Awesome story

Your stories are like a cool breeze every time I read your stories, I can see the character playing their role in my mind… you are a great writer… I wish you all the best

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Amazing

A story of 2 couples with so much hardcore emotions… nk teaches love without expectations and Khushi teaches communicating is the only way to steady a relationship from her mistakes and Arnav teaches unconditional love to believe he will reach to her soon and baby Anu’s possessive nature vatdaaa aieee and auuu …. Is so sweet manorama teach jow to be a mother … it’s all charecters are do good and some so evil …

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Best love story

Dear writer. Heart string is an amazing story.. your style is so differ and energetic.. that it makes me read more… from all of your stories HS is a unique one from starting as it give as a different turn every time… such an amazing writer you are.. you filled my heart with HS that every week I look forward to read your next chapter… Thank you so much for beautiful fanfiction on Arshi in a very different theme..

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Awesome.

Wahh. Wah.. writer.. superb update dear.. I see through your words... It is enough to get a drama alive... Wish to read more... I feel now a days less we get to read.

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awesome

fabulous writting... you are my faourate writter...

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Awesome dear

Thank you dear... for the update... waiting fir next with fast beating heart... what happend to khushi in past... how is she going to accept arnav.

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Awesome

Its a very lovely story... i would like to read further more Waiting to see next update soon as well... If you can please make the story little more fast... soin every chapter we can hope something more valuable drama etc All togather its a nice story and your wri00ting is also fine...

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Waiting for next update

Like this story very much.. it's awesome.. but no more evil ... drama

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S super

Super Woww... khusi in action

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Nice, good,

The story is very very thrilling and want ti read again and again. Al together a Fabulous story

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