auguy86

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Beautifully written. I am, admittedly, no expert on poetry. Novels and short stories are more my thing. Still, I can tell the author poured their heart into this, and it shows.

First, the negative. There were a number of big, very uncommon words used, which harms the overall strength of the work in my opinion. It draws me in, the interrupts my thoughts a moment later with a strange word. Sometimes, simpler is better.

But the strength of the work is its message. Simply put, it’s about life, both the beautiful things in it and the pitfalls we encounter, especially within ourselves. Very nicely done all in all.

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