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GREAT START

I'm really loving this so far, the plot is captivating and had me intrigued from the beginning. Maybe consider using slightly less exclamation marks (!) and try to start sentences with something other than I (this one I noticed less the more I read, but more so in first few chapters) as it adds variability with writing. I could picture each setting quite well and liked the incorporation of current pop culture. The characters seem sophisticated and thought through, I am interested in seeing how it continues to develop!