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Glad to have prompted the characters

The plot is really interesting and I’m quite surprised you came up with this within a day of me prompting the characters. Thanks for the mention😃. Would look forward to your short stories 😁.

A Good initiative

Overall I would say it’s quite nice if it’s a first book. The plot isn’t a copy paste and is quite unique in it’s own way. I would definitely want to know how it turns out after editing. Kudos for your first book😃.

Unconventional Storyline

This is definitely a fresh idea. Doesn’t matter what genre someone is used to reading, they will definitely want to read a story as unique as this one. It just has the right amount of humour as well as an amazing plot.

A heartwrenching tale

Anyone who reads this would feel the pain the characters feel, the loss they go through, their anger, their helplessness and would themselves pray for them to come out victoriously and be able to lead a normal life of their own someday. The stories of Kashmir with different perspectives should be encouraged as it gives a different picture about everything going on. And so I would definitely recommend this book and advice the readers to be open minded while reading it and give it a chance. I guess the story is still not complete. I would take the chance and read it as it goes on.

The Fish Hook

It was the “fish hook”, which is the 2nd chapter of this story which kept me hooked maybe because I didn’t understand the first one. After the fish hook, I liked the “villain”, “rot” was also nice. “Garden” was good too. I liked the writing style though. I don’t know if it’s an unpopular opinion but the writing style is quite unique I must say.