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it's a really good story but,,,

the story is pretty good, but it's too fast paced. the events go by pretty quick and things tend to get confusing especially since they use ' instead of " to write what character's are saying out loud.
i'm still a fan of the story idea though, during part 6-7 it was a lot easier to understand characters and memorise them since there was the panel thing where it lists character status in details.
the story isn't perfect but it's pretty enjoyable by the end of the day :)

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