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Ft thomas

Army veteran looking to become a writer. Have lots of journals to turn into stories

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Once upon a time in Terre hill. Wow!!

I enjoyed this very much. I like how you described the innocence of the kids as they played in the woods. The time that this story took place also gave me a wonderful reference to imagine the thinking and the mood of the country. I could identify with the fear and the rumors that you so vividly brought to life. Being a black man raised during the civil rights movement I can completely relate. Great job. Can't wait to read more.
If you have a chance could you read mine? I could sure use some feed back on my writing. Thanks again for the great read.

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motherhood at the end of the world

Just a few chapters into your book and I can almost sense being there. You put a reader at ease with the descriptive way you write. i can almost feel as though I'm right there with the characters. So far I'm hooked.....

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