Ben Dolce
@bendolce1Conway, S.C.
A former engineer, I have been writing full-time since 2011 and create novels, screenplays, blog posts, articles, and more.
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Intriguing and Fun!
The plot is great and you were able to pull the reader in to wander and explore the new world along with the main character. The amnesia and strange feelings mixed with exploring a strange, new place worked well and helped to make me want to learn more about where she was and what had happened to her. Keep writing and posting chapters!
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