Ben Gauger

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Was born on 11th of August 1975 in Hankinson, North Dakota

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My Review of To Have And To Hold

Kudos go to Liz Aguilar, author of To Have And to Hold a fast-paced, gripping, adrenaline rush from start to finish, one of perhaps the finest pieces of writing I've ever read, in particular because of its' telenovela-like feel, May she continually find success as an author. Bravo my dear, bravo!

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My Review of Becoming a Man in the Shadowlands

Kudos go to Dennis Randall, author of Becoming a Man in the Shadowlands, a raw and otherwise honest look at and portrayal of his life growing up as a child of a broken family and victim and in its finality survivor of childhood sexual abuse, be it by his family, more importantly his mother, or by his peers (i.e. bullies)and his courage and inner strength and in the end perseverance at being able to put it all behind him by enlisting in the military and throughout his years of meritorious service to our country for which I can only say a silent 'thank you'. As for any and all other aspects of his story, other than having the mental and physical fortitude to bring it to fruition. their were parts that captivated me as well made me cringe and others that were, at times, comical, though mildly so, As for his writing style it was excellent though his grammar, and especially punctuation could use a little work, but other than it was a thoroughly enjoyable read. As for finding the love of his life near the end of it all I can only say congratulations and wish him as well as his children continued success in their individual endeavors. Good show old chap.

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My Review Of I Was A Bitch

Kudos go to emiisotherside, author of I Was A Bitch, a thoroughly enjoyable read as much as any other one I have encountered before, with particular attention to her conception of a plot so rich in love, (memory) loss, teen angst and discovering your true self after having endured so much at the cruel hands of fate. Further kudos are given her writing style as well as her technical writing skills, though her use of grammar could use a little work, but other than that not much else is needed. A truly enjoyable tale to be sure.

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My Review Of Edward Graves:Temporal Detective

Kudos go to Doctor Ash, author of Edward Graves:Temporal Detective, for his unique blending of science fiction and make-believe in a time when the latter seems so in short supply these days, what with kids themselves being bombarded by images of one sort or another, whatever their age maybe. Further kudos go to him for his conception of a plot that not only combines the two but also one that is fast-paced and enjoyable through and through, His writing style is incomparable to that of any and all others of this day and age, as is his punctuation, though his grammar leaves something to be desired, All in all, I'd say we've got a real winner on our hands,

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My Review of Ignite

Kudos to Danielle Rogland, author of Ignite, perhaps one of the best stories I've ever read before, for her conception of the plot and pacing and style of writing and in addition her exceptional use of punctuation and grammar, a true masterpiece to be sure. I wish her all the best in her future endeavors as an author.

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My Review of Lady of the Sea

Kudos go to Melinde Mari-Venter author of Lady of the Sea, one of perhaps the most imaginative pieces of writing I've ever read, ever. Overall, it was a true masterpiece, and although the punctuation itself was top-notch the grammar in and of itself would need a little work, oh and then of course their was the epilogue which in and of itself was a little out of place, but other than that the conception of the plot was top-notch.

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A brilliant review for an as equally brilliant author

In my review of Sky Riders, Book One: The Rising Sun author Erin Swan clearly demonstrates a gift unlike that of any author past or present, accomplished or newcomer, with a flair for fantasy unlike any other I have read or ever will come to read. It is, therefore, my humbled yet considered opinion that she will clearly become the next great American author in the genre of fantasy, a genre which is, in my opinion, slowly beginning to fade into the ether and as such is in desperate need of fresh new talent. I only hope that she will continue to dazzle us with her writing style and furthermore would recommend she stay the course from here on out. In closing, I highly recommend any and all fantasy buffs like myself take heed and learn from her example.

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My Review Of Kings and Things

Kudos go to wordworrywill, author of Kings and Things, an otherwise imaginative tale set against the trappings of the royal set, but then again I don't imagine there'd be many authors who invoked the names of Oprah Winfrey, Vladimir Putin, Jeff Bezos, Beyonce and Steven Spielberg, As for the plot, well there isn't all that much to go on, save for the fact that it is itself reminiscent of any and all good fantasy stories, and as for the writing style it is itself the best I've ever seen and finally the technical writing skills are the best I've even seen, though the grammar in and of itself could use a little work, but other than that it is in and of itself a well-rounded story.

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My Review Of Just Juliet

Kudos go to Charlotte Reagan, author of Just Juliet, one of perhaps the best pieces of writing I've ever read, with further kudos going to her conception of a plot filled with teen angst and just about every other aspect of teenage life possible, with her writing style being almost impeccable, though her grammar is something to be desired, I look forward to reading any and all works she has brewing within her writing soul.

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My Review Of The Guardian:A Journey Begins

Kudos go to E,J, Wedge, author of The Guardian: A Journey Begins for his conception of a plot rich in mythology combined with modern-day twists and turns, a truly good read to be sure. Further kudos are given him for his writing style as well as his technical writing skills with high marks for punctuation and grammar. I look forward to his continuation of a truly fine piece of writing.

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My Review Of Boy Who Broke In My Window

Kudos to Dhira Vidhea, author of Boy Who Broke In My Window, an otherwise engaging tale of love and acceptance of the quirkiest of individuals, whose overall conception of the plot is spot-on and whose writing style is impeccable and as for her writing skills they are the best I've ever seen, though her grammar could use a little work, but other than I commend her on a good job overall.

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My Review Of Remnants of Chaos:Chaotic Omens

Kudos to Bryan Laesch, author of Remnants of Chaos:Chaotic Omens for his use of the Gothic style of writing and in addition the footnotes and endnotes at the end of each chapter, a welcome accompaniment to be sure, though his use of grammar could use a little improving, but his use of punctuation is impeccable.

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My Review Of Dark Shadows' Rise

Kudos go to KyKellen, author of Dark Shadows, for her otherwise imaginative portrayal of the battle between good and evil, which is more than can be said for anything I'd ever conceived of writing myself, though personally the depiction of the battle in and of itself was a bit much for me, but other than that her conception deserves high marks, and as for the punctuation itself, it could stand to use some improvement, but other than that, a true masterpiece of writing if I do say so myself.

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A Truly Remarkable Story From A Truly Remarkable Author

In my review for Sky Riders, Book Two: Bright Star, I found author Erin Swan's writing style to be truly superb and worthy of anything and practically everything I have ever witnessed as a reader and heretofore commend her on her grasp of fantasy. I therefore wish her the best of luck in any and all future endeavors thus far.

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