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Ben Woestenburg
the lost padwan
All in all, not a bad story, however, there were too many punctuation errors for my liking. The writer has to understand that when you finish a line of dialogue and you use "he said/she said", you have to use a comma at the end of the dialogue. "I'm going to the store," he said. Not "I'm going to the store." He said. It's too distracting for the reader when the entire story is written like this.
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