Bethany Clark Kempf

Daytona Beach

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Love the character and scene descriptions

The description of character and scene are fantastic. I do feel as though the same point would have come across with just 4-5 victims rather than 7. It seemed a little drawn out as we awaited the discovery of each victim, however, the attention to detail of each scene kept my attention and I’m really intrigued to continue reading.

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Creative story line

Aside from some grammatical errors, it’s well written with a creative story line. Describing the characters appearance in more detail would help readers picture who they are reading about. Otherwise, I think the author does a great job at setting the scene and I’m looking forward to finishing it to see if my instinct of who did it is correct!

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